It started with the 5 year old boys then the 5 year old girls it went in that patten all the way up to the Yr 8 boys. When it was time for the Yr 7 boys (thats me) the Tension was high.
When the siren went I ran for my life. I started to fall back but that wasn't stoping me I was like a machine I was jumping puddles like thunder hurdling through mud like an alligator.
It was the last stand me and the mud filled track just as I was to the finish line my friend was sliding in puddles I quickly ran to the puddle he was sliding in and I didn't care about winning I just wanted to slide.(Me)


(My Friend)
Hi Anthony,
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your story about the fun run. You explained it very well. But maybe next time you could include a bit more how you felt about after the run
Hi Anthony,
ReplyDeleteGood Job on writing your Cross Country Reflection. I really like how you exaggerated some parts of your writing. Sliding in the mud sounds really really fun! I was going to do that but I didn't. But now I'm wishing I did. Maybe next you could use more interesting vocab. Keep up the good work!